Sunday, August 19, 2012

Argumentative Essay: RH Bill(DRAFT)




                                                      Argumentative Essay: RH Bill

            Studies show that the youth are more vulnerable and at a greater risk without proper reproductive health services. Young pregnancies account for 30% of all daily births in the Philippines. According to the Commission on Population, 3 out of 4 young women die everyday because of maternal complications. Furthermore, A study by the National Epidemiology Center in 2005 shows young pregnancies have the highest rate of fetal deaths, especially by women under age 15. In December 2010, the Department of Health reports that there are 489 cases of young men and women infected with HIV. There are 6 new and unique detections of HIV everyday, 59% of which is in 20-29 years old bracket and 28% belong to the 15-24 years age range. In line with these problems, there is a need to make solutions. One of great solutions would be the implementation of the Reproductive Health bill, or the RH bill. One of the aims of the RH bill is to solve these problems by providing access medically safe, legal, affordable and quality natural and modern family planning methods. The RH bill also aims to guarantee universal access to information about birth control and maternal care. Thus, the RH Bill should be passed because it helps the Philippines to lean towards progress by offering women healthcare, providing sexual education to students, and helping the Filipinos to have responsible family planning. 
            There are reasons why the reproductive health bill is not yet passed; however, majority of the people believe that the advantages brought by the implementation of the reproductive health bill will outweigh the cons that go with it. According to the survey hosted by Pulse Asia, 69% of the respondents from different regions are pro RH bill and they believe that the implementation of the bill would do more good than harm.
            The first plausible disadvantage is that the money that will be used in funding the bill would be subject to corruption from officials. An estimate of 14 billion pesos would be allotted to the bill if the bill would be implemented (Department of Health, 2012).  The money involved can blind those corrupt officials; however, health and development should be prioritized.  The bill provides healthcare services to women and the marginalized. The Women and marginalized are prioritized by providing for their needs such as legal, affordable and quality reproductive health care services. After the implementation of the bill, the State guarantees universal access to medically-safe, legal, affordable and quality reproductive health care services, methods, devices, supplies and relevant information thereon even as it prioritizes the needs of women and children, among other underprivileged sectors (SECTION 2, RH Bill, 2008).  Furthermore, women seeking care for post-abortion complications shall be treated and counseled in a humane, non-judgmental and compassionate manner. The government shall ensure that women seeking care for post-abortion complications shall be treated and counseled in a humane, non-judgmental and compassionate manner. (SECTION 3, RH Bill, 2008). The health and development of the marginalized sector and the women should be clearly prioritized over the risk of the money being stolen by corrupted officials.
            Second, the implementation of the bill would possibly increase the number of couples engaged in pre-marital sex. However, this would not be the case because the bill aims to provide sexual education to address this problem. As stated in the bill, “Mandatory Age-Appropriate Reproductive Health Education. – Recognizing the importance of reproductive health rights in empowering the youth and developing them into responsible adults, Reproductive Health Education in an age-appropriate manner shall be taught by adequately trained teachers starting from Grade 5 up to Fourth Year High School. In order to assure the prior training of teachers on reproductive health, the implementation of Reproductive Health Education shall commence at the start of the school year one year following the effectivity of this Act.” If the youth are educated regarding the consequences of pre-marital sex, the number involved would be significantly lowered.
            Third, critics believe that the bill would lead to the legalization of abortion; however, the bill aims to prevent unwanted, unplanned and mistimed pregnancies. As stated in the bill, with “respect for life” as one of its guiding principles (sec. 2), the bill unequivocally states that it does not seek to “change the law on abortion, as abortion remains a crime and is punishable” (sec. 3.m). It can be argued, in fact, that in guaranteeing information on and access to “medically-safe, legal, affordable and quality” natural and modern family planning methods (sec. 2), the bill seeks “to prevent unwanted, unplanned and mistimed pregnancies” (sec. 5.k). The bill addresses the issue before it occurs and not the issue after pregnancy occurs. 
            Lastly, the church disproves of the use of contraceptives. If the church is pro-life, how can the suffering of the marginalized sector and the mass with regards to the sexually transmitted diseases be ignored? The bill aims to address these problems with the adequate supply of contraceptives given to the mass. It is now time for the church to realize that the old teachings are not always applicable to the present situations and problems.
            With the pros and cons stated, the volume of the population should realize that the implementation of the RH bill would not just cause us present relief but also the development of the country by offering women healthcare, providing sexual education to students, and helping the Filipinos to have responsible family planning. It is now time to act, let us stop being so naive to the issues being faced by the country. The implementation of the bill is one step further to development.

           
           
           
           




Word count: 915

Sources:

Anti-RH bill proponents are ineffective and ignored by the people; 69% support RH bill. (2010, December 1). Retrieved from http://2010presidentiables.wordpress.com/2010/12/01/new-pulse-asia-survey-on-rh-bill-shows-the-anti-rh-bill-proponents-are-ineffective-and-ignored-by-the-people


The RH Bill as pro-life and pro-women. (2011, March 9). Retrieved from http://www.likhaan.org/content/rh-bill-pro-life-and-pro-women

Reproductive Health Bill. (2011, February 21). Retrieved from http://www.congress.gov.ph/download/basic_15/HB04244.pdf

PB listens to pros, cons. (2011, July 19). Retrieved from http://newsinfo.inquirer.net/25789/pb-listens-to-pros-cons






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